I was somewhat disappointed with your story about the demonstration. Instead of indicating that it was one of the City’s largest demonstrations in its history by volunteer residents the bulk of your report was dedicated to a PR release from FASNY’s paid spokesman that said nothing new but the same tired, stale arguments. I was very surprised you did not mention how frequent the cars passing the demonstration honked their horns and raised their thumbs in support of the marchers.
I know you intend to report the facts fairly but this piece did not, in my view, focus on what the real news was today.
Very truly yours,